1. "Chinn turns the tables on the Brigadier
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2. The script calls for the monster
literally to grow out of the wall.
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3. with surfaces that are
"uneven, veinous, glistening slightly,
like a series of caverns,
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4. "or the inside of an artery".
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5. Axos owed its "organic" look initially
to Terrance Dicks.
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6. In earlier drafts, it appeared
more like a conventional spaceship:
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7. A manufactured environment
with commonplace corridors and rooms.
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8. which is why the Axos model
Appears to have an exhaust system.
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9. But Dicks, remembering that the ship
was supposed to be part of an organism,
asked the writers to make it
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10. "rather like the inside of a warren":
Instead of corridors, tunnels,
and "spaces" rather than rooms.
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11. Some of this scene's scripted exposition
was cut during production.
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12. They have no home planet of their own,
he explains: They are
"the scavengers of the universe".
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13. Filer is played by Paul Grist,
whose other roles in the 1970s
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14. included a community leader
in Survivors (1976)
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in Blake's 7 (1979).
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16. He had played a naval lieutenant
in the Napoleonic-era adventure serials
Triton (1968) and Pegasus (1969).
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17. The authors were asked
to rewrite the conversation here,
to give it
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18. "more Power Game crackle,
urgency, and wit".
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19. on the way early 1970s Doctor Who
dramatised power politics.
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20. In other words, it's not good
to be limited to science alone,
like Winser.
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21. Winser had failed to understand what
the Doctor meant by "Beware of Greeks
who come bearing gifts",
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22. "He takes a deep breath
to reinflate his sense of importance,"
says the script.
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23. Rewrites added some wistful reminiscence
from the Doctor, underlining
the importance of the Trojan allusion:
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24. Troy was a "pretty little place",
he recalls.
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25. He stayed in a villa
by the sea's edge: "You could lie in bed
and fish for breakfast."
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26. The Axon eyepieces had tiny pinholes
to enable the actors to see out.
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27. World-wide distribution
is "our normal trade practice",
adds Chinn in the script.
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28. He then tries to shake hands
on the deal, but the Axon "pretends
not to notice" his outstretched hand.
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29. "We'll have a copy of the full agreement
sent to you as soon as possible,"
Chinn promises.
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30. In a moment, 23-year-old stuntwoman
Sue Crosland takes over
as the Axon woman.
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31. The mask didn't fit her face:
Her nose is underneath the mouth,
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32. and the mask's nosepiece was sitting
on the bridge of her nose.
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33. This meant that the mask stuck
to her face every time she breathed in.
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34. The mask's poor fit also scuppered
the effect that was originally intended:
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35. Beginning with a normal Axon face,
the mask was to be inflated,
distorting the features,
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36. then popped like a balloon
to make the face suddenly collapse.
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37. As it sucks energy from the earth
around it, suggested Terrance Dicks,
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38. Axos becomes the centre
of a spreading blight:
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39. The flora and fauna die off around it -
including here, one of the trees.
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40. This was scripted
as a location scene outside Axos.
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41. Tim Pigott-Smith
Makes his first television appearance
here, playing Captain Harker.
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42. Hailing from Shakespeare's home town,
Pigott-Smith later became
a distinguished classical actor.
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43. You may also have seen him play the
discoverer of DNA,
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44. In the script he wonders whether Axonite
is "just beads and tinsel for fools
and savages".
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45. "The world must be allowed
to develop at its own pace."
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46. but the Doctor points out
that it isn't scorched:
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47. Like a sample of root he took
in the area, it's "desiccated,
dehydrated, burnt out from within".
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48. Bob Baker and Dave Martin worked closely
together as they wrote:
Baker concentrated on the storyline,
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49. while Martin dealt more with concepts,
characters, and jokes.
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50. Martin controlled the final version,
in that he took responsibility
for typing it up.
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51. They were keen to give their scripts
a strong theme
beyond the adventure itself,
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52. so Axonite served as a vehicle
for satire on human cupidity
and capitalism.
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53. In the script, Jo thinks the Doctor
has switched sides here.
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54. The Doctor replies:
"A matter of loyalties, my dear.
Mine must be to science."
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55. The Doctor's uncertain loyalties
were the basis of a sub-plot
which was toned down before recording.
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56. It began earlier this episode,
when the Doctor tries to charm Winser
by taking an interest in his equipment:
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57. "I gather you've reached
a relativity factor of point eight 'G'?"
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58. The key is to be able to control
the reaction,
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59. and Axonite, "which obviously
has an existence in the fourth
dimension", could be the way to do it.
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60. Jo begins to suspect that the Doctor
is helping Winser
for his own underhanded reasons:
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61. This shot mixes live action
With a model keyed in by CSO.
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62. The technique, often used in mid-1970s
Doctor Who, was first developed
for this serial,
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63. to meet the script's request
for the laboratory to be as large
as possible.
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64. The script indicates that they're
looking at the "laser-triggered ion
discharge tube assembly",
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65. which "looks like the inside
of a television camera".
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66. The Doctor says it's a great achievement
to have got the experiment authorised
in a government controlled facility.
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67. Winser explains that Hardiman
is "terribly keen" on the project:
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68. "He cut through all the red tape
for me."
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69. It was a design decision to make it
dangle from the roof instead.
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70. In an early version, Winser
and the Doctor use the light accelerator
to enlarge a laboratory rat,
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71. repeating the Axons' trick
from the last episode.
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72. In the script, he suggests they might
"swap a few ideas,
perhaps even cannibalise a part or two."
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73. David Savile, who plays Malcolm Winser,
was later best known as a traditionalist
naval officer in Warship (1973-7).
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74. The interior of Axos was a collaboration
between two BBC departments.
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75. The set designer, Kenneth Sharp,
conceived the overall look,
drawing his inspiration
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which is set inside a human body.
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77. However, the moving parts of the set,
such as the eponymous "claws"
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78. were the work of the
visual effects designer, John Horton.
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79. When this episode was recorded,
the serial wasn't
called 'The Claws of Axos'.
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80. It was still 'The Vampire from Space'.
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81. Dicks had proposed that title
on 9 October 1970 as a replacement
for 'The Axons',
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82. which he'd only assigned
in the first place to avoid confusion
with the previous working titles.
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83. 'The Vampire from Space'
had "the right melodramatic
Doctor Who ring", he remarked.
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84. So the first two episodes went
into production under that title,
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85. which still appears chalked
on the countdown clock at the start
of the master tapes.
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86. Sections of the wall are made of jablite
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87. The eye of Axos, described in the script
as the creature's "soul"
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88. is partly made of flexible corrugated
tubing, then a new
and rarely seen product.
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89. The prop caused the crew much ribald
merriment over the connotations
of its shape.
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90. Unfortunately, because these were
mains-powered, they caused an industrial
demarcation dispute.
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91. In the heavily unionised BBC
of the 1970s, every man had his
own designated area of jurisdiction,
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92. and many a walk-out was threatened
when one group seemed to infringe
on another's territory.
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93. The studio electricians felt
that only they should operate
electrical equipment,
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94. and there were heated discussions before
the effects men were finally allowed
to switch on their wall throbbers.
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95. Smoke is released when the "petals" open
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96. to conceal the fact that the "mouth"
only goes back about ten feet.
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97. The Axos exterior was made
of foam rubber and latex,
modelled on a chicken-wire base.
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98. This made it rather flimsy.
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99. The beach was landscaped
with the assistance of Kent Plant Hire,
and the Axos mouth buried.
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100. But the prop wasn't sturdy enough
to take the weight of the shingle,
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101. so the scenery crew had
to dig it up again in a hurry
before it collapsed.
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102. A hasty reinforcement job made it safe
for the actors,
and back in the ground it went.
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103. It was clear that they still had a lot
to learn, including how to handle
a large regular cast of characters.
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104. They also had to take on board a change
of production method initiated
by Barry Letts for the 1971 series:
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105. Episodes would now be recorded in pairs,
rather than on a week-by-week basis,
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106. so each pair of episodes had
to have more or less the same sets.
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107. Terrance Dicks, perhaps
recalling the similar help he got
from Malcolm Hulke early in his career,
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108. patiently guided Baker and Martin
through the technical intricacies
of the craft, proffering advice
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109. on everything from story points
to script layout.
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110. Now you see him,
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111. now you don't.
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112. Roger Delgado's stunt double
is Havoc member Jack Cooper,
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113. also seen in this serial as a stunt Axon
and a stunt UNIT soldier.
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114. In an earlier version, the fake Filer
is brought in
by the Regular Army soldiers.
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115. He was wandering around,
apparently dazed,
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116. and is suspected of having killed
the guard outside Axos
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117. He's lucid about one thing:
He will only speak to the Doctor.
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118. But the soldiers simply imprison him
along with the Brigadier and Jo.
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119. The second Filer here is played
by Derek Ware, whom you saw
as Pigbin Josh in the last episode.
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120. In the earlier version, this sequence is
part of the end-of-episode cliffhanger.
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121. "Filer" remains locked up until the
Doctor starts his Axonite experiment.
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122. The Axonite "zizzes", Axos convulses,
and "Filer" too has a violent reaction.
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123. In frenzy,
he attacks the Regular Army sentry.
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124. The UNIT party is free:
The Brigadier's priority is
to contact the United Nations,
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125. but he sends one of his men
to take "Filer" to the Doctor.
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126. The authors were asked to play up
the Doctor's uncertainty
over which of the Filers survived,
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127. until "Filer reassures him
with some colloquial Filer type line".
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128. So they wrote an exchange
Over whether the Doctor is irritated or
relieved to hear himself called "Doc".
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129. In the script, the Doctor and Filer
have trouble getting past
the corporal guarding the Brigadier:
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130. "I know he's incommunicado,"
says the Doctor. "Good heavens, man,
I'm incommunicado myself!"
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131. Filer shows his CIA identification
and lies that Chinn has sent him
to interrogate "these guys".
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132. Just before rehearsals began,
this scene was rewritten to establish
that the room is bugged,
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133. making Captain Harker's
interruption less arbitrary.
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134. In rehearsal, however, the director
and actors worried
whether this was clear enough,
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135. and toyed with an unscripted,
explanatory line from Harker:
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136. "An elementary bugging device"
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137. But in the end the close-up
you've just seen, again unscripted,
did the job instead.
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138. "Greyhound" is the Brigadier, "Trap 1"
is UNIT HQ.
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139. At this time, the production team
was trying to build up a consistent
system of radio call-signs for UNIT,
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140. with designations mostly drawn
from greyhound racing.
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141. Pre-production on this serial started,
in a sense, long before anyone knew
what serial it would be.
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142. All the production team knew for certain
was that there would be a third serial
in the 1971 series,
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143. and it was on that basis
that the rehearsal room was booked
on 4 September 1970.
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144. That was a week before the first script
was commissioned
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145. and at that stage,
as the commissioning paperwork noted,
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146. "Subsequent episodes 2-4 may
or may not be written."
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147. In other words, there was still
an option to write off the script
if it wasn't up to scratch.
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148. In the script, the Doctor says more
about the objective of his
"necessary and urgent" experiment.
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149. The draft script for Episode 1 came in
on 25 September.
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150. At this point, the serial became known
as 'The Axons',
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151. a title which lasted all of eight days
before being replaced.
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152. The script specifies that we see
the first Axon clutching his face:
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153. "A quick glimpse of a streaming,
boiling glob streak, running down
through his fingers".
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154. The door to Hardiman's office
was the subject of a minor flap three
days before the first studio session.
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155. It was realised that the UNIT personnel
are imprisoned there - but the door
didn't have a working lock.
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156. Arrangements were hastily made
to add one,
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157. even though the design budget
was already spent.
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158. "Quack" was a rehearsal improvement
on the scripted line
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159. Coming up is another censored
"collapsing face" shot.
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160. The authors later described the Axons
as individual neurons within
a single brain - that is, Axos itself.
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161. The name Axon derives from a term used
in the science of neurophysiology:
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162. An axon is part of a nerve,
a long filament which carries
outgoing impulses.
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163. In the last shot, the glob's movement
was slowed down in editing
using a videodisc machine.
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164. "See next week's thrill-packed,
spine-tingling, knee-knocking episode,"
says the script.
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167. Bill Barnsley, Peter Holmes,
Paul Phillips
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168. Geoff Brighty, Roger Minnis
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169. Eden Fox, Stuart Myers
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170. Douglas Roe,
Clinton Morris
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171. George Howse, Pierce McAvoy,
Steve Smart
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172. Uncredited production contributors
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173. Peter Granger
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174. Geoff Higgs
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175. Mike Catherwood
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176. Judy Kaine,
Vicky Thomas
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177. Bernard Fox
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178. Marion McDougall
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179. Ray Warwick
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